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Evolution of a panel

This weekend is solely dedicated to storyboard work.
Ok, no, I lied.
I keep going back to Water Tribe. I started posting part 4 revised. It's going rather fast because the tweaks are so minor. But...

Azula evolves!Collapse )

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rohantm
Mar. 15th, 2009 04:35 pm (UTC)
B. Her torso seems a little bit short in A; she feels taller and more regal in B.
rufftoon
Mar. 15th, 2009 05:15 pm (UTC)
I'm starting to call A "Stumpy", ha ha!
rohantm
Mar. 15th, 2009 05:37 pm (UTC)
Ha! I don't think it's that A is stumpy. It's just that her new-improved head is larger than her old one, which makes her look shorter unless you adjust the torso too.

(I like that you added an urn at the bottom to make the space more interesting. But would OCD Azula stand for it being tipped over? ^^)
archangelbeth
Mar. 16th, 2009 02:40 pm (UTC)
(Eh, it ain't her urn. That's how I'd express it. She's probably been eyeing it for several minutes now, pondering how best to blow it up...)
neurona_muerta
Mar. 15th, 2009 05:13 pm (UTC)
B!!! *_____*
wodhaund
Mar. 15th, 2009 05:54 pm (UTC)
B! Darker linework makes her stand out better.

--Ack, I totally missed the vote.

But! I gotta say, I love watching you rework these pages. It's really fascinating, and even if you don't narrate the process, I feel like I'm learning a lot just seeing the result of someone going through it.
rufftoon
Mar. 15th, 2009 09:11 pm (UTC)
If I was to narrate it, it would sound like "This is off, why can't I make this work, I need to start life drawing again. What the hey, I'll take a break from it..."

Reworked pages: bad narrating subject.
kestrel755
Mar. 15th, 2009 06:46 pm (UTC)
B!!
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rufftoon
Mar. 15th, 2009 09:08 pm (UTC)
Movie (yay)
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rufftoon
Mar. 15th, 2009 09:46 pm (UTC)
It's better not to give too much detail- contract and all. But more on that later when there are more announcements about it on the web or in print.
tobu_ishi
Mar. 17th, 2009 10:38 pm (UTC)
I prefer B. The lines are bolder and stronger, she's sitting up more and seems generally more alert and in command (and menacing, at that), and I like the symbolism of her head just slightly eclipsing the Water Tribe symbol on the wall.
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