Water Tribe chapter 4 may be done (though I feel like I will return and tweak a few things there too, thanks to Skylark and his comments...I may not follow them all, but darn it sometimes they are totally right and I MUST fix!), but I still have the polishing of chapter 3 to do.
Backpedalling to older pages, which I will post on DA tonight.
I will make some changes right after. Expect one or two new pages next post. I remember the comments some of you have made, how I should better establish the fact that Zhao's firebending will return just before the end. I'll reactivate it during his fight with Yueh though it won't last. At that moment, his firebending is still very much self-defense activated. It really only starts up again after he's been rescued.
Guess he needed the cold shock.
Or maybe it was the Ocean.
Spirit business...I wonder how much I can get away with by using that excuse all the time.