Took me a while to do these: last weekend I worked, and I actually re-retweaked some of these pages more than once. Sometimes, just one panel that was frustrating me.
I remembered past comments, and decided to follow the suggestions and added one page before Zhao lets out his frustration. It probably works better.
Avatar starts again this Monday on Nick! Season Finale in ONE WEEK!
And I'll finally get to post new Water Tribe pages. Though I may have to put spoilers warnings, for those few people who won't be able to see the finale. I need to work on them, make them pretty :)
Excuse me, I need to go put some ice on my upper lip. Trying (and succeeding) in keeping the swelling down.
- Current Location:Burbank
- Current Mood:
uncomfortable
- Current Music:no music
Comments
Take care of yourself, now!
And on comics, wonderful expressions as usual! I have one small comment on a typo on 168 since it's spelled "negotiator" with a T. But I do love Zhao's frustrated WHUNK.
Oops, typo caused by french language slip (négociateur). Thanks for pointing it out, I'll correct it for the DA post.
And the Avatar fun really starts on Thursday with The Southern Raiders. Yay!
I can't believe Avatar is nearly over...*gasp* I hope your lip gets better soon!
Looks like my lip will turn all the pretty shades of purple, green and yellow before it gets better. I may still have colors when I go to SDCC :b
Though personaly, I liked the dialog from the first version better. It just seemed more zhao of Zhao to think the council wanted to talk about him.
I don't know, that's just me.
Steph and I will be at SDCC this year - think you might be able to take on a couple of Avatar-related commissions?
*cheers the Water Tribe pages!*
*pats you gently for the ow*
Nice sequence - the only suggestion would be to replace panel 4, p. 167 with panel 4, p. 168 and vice versa.
Looking forward to the new episodes!
Skylark
You're also an inspiration and talented and what I'd love to grow up to be. Thanks for sharing Water Tribe with LJ so I could see it (yeah, just me. No one else). I mean, I rarely catch Avatar, but your work is always worth looking up.
I also read what I believe was your strip in, uhm...oh damn. It was the short your avatar was from--the Egyptian cat. I'm totally blanking on the book's name. It's...well, not FLOAT, but...something like that? Anyways, as short as it was, I loved it.
So yeah. Gonna go back to trolling now. Please keep up the glorious work, no matter what it is, you witty person you. Best of luck with the teeth situation. Teeth kinda suck.
<3