Gosh, I'm rather late to the party, so I hope you don't mind my asking this...

I can't help but notice that the tags on your livejournal only go so far back. So, is there anywhere you have the entirety of Water Tribe posted? I'd love to read it from start to current sometime, but I can't seem to find said start anywhere.

Thanks very much for your help!

Ooh, thanks! I've been trying to pass the WaterTribe links around to my close friends, this helps a lot. :D

All looks pretty stellar. I love reading all of this twice.

Haha, I was totally just about to edit my comment because I was scared I sounded sarcastic. What I was going to say:

You write this all so well and the images flow perfectly into one-another and you can just get completely immersed even if not much has been changed... c: ♥♥

Omigosh, looking forward to even better fight scenes. :o

You realize if some of this sexual tension is not released in ch4 after the hiatus, something in my brain will break :|.

I love the pirate guy's design so much btw. And officer Kwon xD.

A malleable skull? Good heavens. I'm glad he's better, that sounds horrid even for a ruthless pirate like Lao. :D

The dynamics of the panel where he grabs her, and the closeup just after, are brilliant. Very intense, and you get a good sense that he's gripping her just hard enough to not really hurt her. (Well, probably a little. He's Zhao, control isn't his thing. Not too much, though. Can't have her squawking like...well...a seagull. ^_~)

Ah, by the way, would you mind if I posted the Yue and La picture to my dA? I made it for your comic, so I figure I ought to ask if it would bother you.

Yee, Najua!

Apparently one of my close pals was trying to see you at the NYCC, he had a press pass and was trying to get interviews with anyone associated with Avatar. He said that everyone turned down interviews, I bet you guys were swamped. XD

Ah! I mentioned your name and he said it looked familiar. Apparently they were given a list of people who were guests of the con and what they were associated. I guess he never saw you, though. M... man, the more I hear about the con, the more I wish I'd gone. @_@

YEEK, I just realized something-- on page 111 in the transition from the third to the fourth panel, Zhao switches the position of his hands. The panel should be flipped, but that would break 180º rule. I don't think anyone else has noticed, so it's probably not really that big of a deal. XD

Do you plan to compile all of them sometime later ?

I like the angle on Lao on the fourth page there.

By the way, how d'you pronounce 'Nauja'? Nawha? Nowja?

Lao's face in the last panel of the 5th page always cracks me up XD

Howdy - merci beaucoup for the pages - I'm tickled pink that you're able to make sense of my suggestions, says I. :-)

104 - Cool
105 - Gr8 - nice angle on pn. 1
106 - pn. 4 - cool plot twist - sugg.- close-up of zhao with ominous/devious expression + add panel close-up of Zhao freaking out
107 - Cool
108 - Great downshot in pn. 1 - sugg. - change panel order to 1-3-4-2-5
109 - 111 - nice sequence

Random weird fanboy suggestion - have Zhao squint once in a while -

Best,

Skylark

corr. 106 - pn.4 close-up of Lao.

*squees*

Grammargal comments:

106: Would add comma: "With new, more efficient fire navy patrols" -- optional comma after "more efficient," too.

p. 107: "You know the game, you play it too." -- probably want to turn that comma into a dash, a semi-colon, or a period? Two verbs, one comma, they fight! (Like Thunderdome! ...help...)

*squees more*

Honestly, re-reading this is cool.

Am I blind on dA? Because you keep saying you're posting them, but I never get notified that you do! I'm so confused! TT_TT

Ah! Yes! That would explain my blindness very well indeed!