I don't mind you posting them here in LJ (I like it better since I check the LJ more often than DA XD) but it's up to you really :)

Good luck on work! Are you working from home did you have to bring work home to finish it? And LOL on pretty Lao ^^

Then I'll keep posting here for easier updates. Making life easier, I'm all for it.

I like the expansions you've made! It definitely reads a lot easier than the first time around... I still feel bad for that poor family D:

I enjoy seeing the reworks on LJ! But of course I'll accept whatever you find is more efficient for you (especially if that means more of ch 4 >:3 ...do it!!)

Actually I would rather happy if you kept posting them on Lj because I never check DA that much anymore. XD

Zhao: Powerhungry as always!

Great stuff - best strip I've come across on the interwebs - they should publish this - I remember reading this before, but where and when I originally read this, that I cannot say... so I am confused - but it's all good, I can deal with it - ;-)

Comments and suggestions -

Smooth flow on this sequence - all in one take almost -
96 - nice page design - is there missing a little mouth connector thingy on the word balloon? (On page 91, panel 2, there's a little word balloon glitch, btw)
97- Cool pirates - maybe put '...and enjoying it' in a separate box for a little dramatic pause effect to accentuate the humor.
98- Is fine, but I'd see more closeups instead of panel 2 to go with the text in boxes 2 & 3 -
100 - very nice page - I'd see a haughty looking close-up shot of Zhao looking down at the slaves between panels 4 & 5 (Panel 2, with the hand close-up, although it helps the flow, doesn't seem necessary to me - close-ups with hands are cool, but there are already two of them in the previous pages...)

Thanks for sharing - take care!

Skylark
http://skylark-.blogspot.com/

It's so awesome!
A powerful story with themes as old as time. Oh Zhao, your mother must have been exasperated with you as a child if this is how you behave. XD

*snicker* I have alerts set on LJ for when you post, so... Whatever you decide. :thumbsup:

Huzzah! *breaks out the bottle of Yahoo chocolate drink* Cheers!

Second page - "unstability" should be "instability."

Lovely update, Zhao is soooo deliciously callous!

Wah! All this time I never realized you had a livejournal! Apparently I have a lot of comics to catch up on now! <D~~ Also, are you able to come to Anime North this year? (Or are you stuck in California?) I hope I can see you sometime this summer. I have a present for you. :3

Awww, that's too bad. Well, unfortunately there's no SDCC for me this year but I'll be at TCAF for sure.

Beautiful, I love your comics.


But every time I start to feel a *little* sympathy for Zhao...I remember this part and I want to sic Nauja on him! The B@$%@&D!!!!!!

I discovered your Water Tribe comic on DeviantArt, about a month ago and I'm totally hooked. My family is working our through the Avatar DVDs now, and none of us are in the target demographic (me: 36, husband: 45, kid: 3). Anyway, I'd love to read the Water Tribe pages past 100, but I can't find them in sequence. Have you posted them?

Wow I just stumbled across your comics and they are wonderful! I haven't seen Avatar, but I'm definitely going to check it out. You do great work and I love the story. It reminds me of my favorite comic, Elfquest. I will defnitely be back here for more! (For what it's worth, I vote for putting them on LJ as well as DA).