The files have been sent!
Some weird little problems have creeped up, like a strange change in page size. (wtf? I swear I put in the right page size, how the heck does that mysteriously change by fraction of inches??).
But no big, these are all things that can easily be fixed by the printer. They have all the necessary material.
Now I'll wait for the proofs, give approval, and wait for everything to come back.
Where the heck am I gonna put all these, I'll have to figure out.
In the meantime, back to Water Tribe reworks, yay!
Still reworking part 2, and these are all new added pages to help the story along or do a better transition with what will come up next.
At least, I hope so.
If you have any notes, suggestions, comments, all welcome.
Some weird little problems have creeped up, like a strange change in page size. (wtf? I swear I put in the right page size, how the heck does that mysteriously change by fraction of inches??).
But no big, these are all things that can easily be fixed by the printer. They have all the necessary material.
Now I'll wait for the proofs, give approval, and wait for everything to come back.
Where the heck am I gonna put all these, I'll have to figure out.
In the meantime, back to Water Tribe reworks, yay!
Still reworking part 2, and these are all new added pages to help the story along or do a better transition with what will come up next.
At least, I hope so.
If you have any notes, suggestions, comments, all welcome.
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Comments
This is a rare and sweet occasion!
I'm always going to look up to your art, Rufftoon, and will always remember your advice and kindness.
Even if I may not be able to get into art ever again because of life and such.
I'll look back on these pages and smile.
Awesome work as always!
Many thanks for the very kind words *blushes*
Who knows where life will take you- art may not become your career (though it would be wonderful, for you do have the talent), but art will certainly stay forever part of your life. You express yourself so well through it.
I like that he sleeps with his hair down. I suppose that makes sense but still, its cute!
Many thanks for your input! That always helps.
I really love how you can make everybody look so different! It's a totally awesome skill. :D
Zhao's a bit of a woobie isn't he? XD
I'm not sure if Zhao has any "woobie lining" inside of him. He's a bit more insecure than before, I'll grant that.
Only nitpicks I can find are...let's see. In the third page, it's a little odd for our wise old general to mention a "third person" when the angry bald fellow has already named three (Iroh, Zuko, and the mysterious "she")...unless they're talking about the same "she", in which case it becomes odd that the elder general asks if he's forgotten when he was just talking about her. Somewhat confuzzling. :/
My fault- the original dialogue (before I messed up with it), only mentionned Zuko. I added Iroh afterwards, and forgot to fix the dialogue from three to four. I'll fix that for the DA post.
Many thanks for your sharp eyes!
And there are mysteries explicated, yes! I think that will clarify things, indeed. (It sacrifices a little of the SURPRISE! WTF?! factor, but it builds tension as well.)
It's strange- some things that seem to happen suddenly without too much explanations seem to work better on film or television. Drawn books...well, I'm certain some talented author can pull it off. I just haven't quite figured it out yet, so maybe going for slightly more clarity is the way to go for now.
Anyway, I think it's not a bad tradeoff to know there's plots against him, but have more mysteries about Who Is Interested In Zhao.
That only gets revealed later, and not even through investigation.
(I will never write a mystery novel, ha ha!)
I feel like some mangas or animed WANT to be totally obscure. Give me Death Notes with its twist and turns any day instead...)
And some wants to be totally obscure. Yeah, Eva and Utena, I'm lookin' at you!
*squees at the "she"*...