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Brain dead, so can't write - back in Burbank, returning to work tomorrow, couldn't fall asleep earlier on but now...NOW I will fall asleep in a few seconds!

After I post these revised Water Tribe pages.










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incandescens
Jan. 3rd, 2008 09:59 am (UTC)
Great stuff. Especially love Zhao's swaggering in his new outfit. The "burning hand" thing is coming across nicely.
rufftoon
Jan. 3rd, 2008 04:19 pm (UTC)
No one better add anything to that outfit, or he's going to walk around thinking he's chief material!
No wait, he already does.
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rufftoon
Jan. 3rd, 2008 04:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I tried adding a bit more to the scene, I'm glad it is working out.
Guh, crowd scene. One shot, and I'll cheat all the rest!
Oh yes, it is tanned properly. Though, if someone had been evil and wanted to annoy him...ew!
archangelbeth
Jan. 3rd, 2008 12:32 pm (UTC)
Oh, page 36... Oh, the way he's got this, "Hey, what're ya doin'?" grin on his face on the 3rd panel. And knowing what's coming. Oh, my heart aches!

I love the whole hand bit you added. Very nice.
rufftoon
Jan. 3rd, 2008 04:24 pm (UTC)
I guess he needs a bit of sympathy for what's going to happen next.
The burning hand thing felt like a little loose end in the previous version. Glad it fits here. At least, he won't have too much time to think or talk about it. He's getting confirmation of everything soon.

edit: though I do wonder what kind of crazier theories he made about the hand thing on his way back to the city.

Edited at 2008-01-03 04:25 pm (UTC)
tammylee
Jan. 3rd, 2008 04:50 pm (UTC)
I like the addition of Zhao wanting to talk about his hand... and asking if he looked better than Kuruk!
rufftoon
Jan. 3rd, 2008 06:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks, glad that little addition seems to be working with people.
Not that anyone living would remember what Kuruk looked like, but Zhao can hope he has more..."class".
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rufftoon
Jan. 3rd, 2008 06:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Zhao competing with a long dead Avatar for looks...hmmm...He shouldn't be doubting himself, handsome devil that he is.
There will be a few more new pages on top of the reworked ones. Almost done with part one, yay!
yatsirch
Jan. 4th, 2008 12:28 am (UTC)
That action sequence is stunning, I'm pretty much geeking out over it! Nice sense of vertigo and the overall ferociousness in the mole bear. I also totally agree with all the positive feedback above, the final four pages have a very nice pace and Zhao is as charming ever ;)
rufftoon
Jan. 4th, 2008 01:15 am (UTC)
Thank you- a rather short action sequence overall, but there will be more in the future :)
I guess Zhao can be charming when he wants too. I just would not trust him.
tobu_ishi
Jan. 4th, 2008 06:43 am (UTC)
Ooh. You used the Inuit drum dancers! Was the idea from that link I sent, way back? *tickled* They look fantastic!

The whole thing does, really. It's nice to see you working in some of the later OCs more. Your paneling still makes me jealous...
rufftoon
Jan. 4th, 2008 04:06 pm (UTC)
I always wanted to use the inuit dancers at some point- I'm certain the video links you sent helped at some point.
Thank you very much. This being a second version, I get to try and rework some page layouts, hopefully for more clarity.
snapes_angel
Jan. 4th, 2008 07:25 am (UTC)
:thumbsup:
rufftoon
Jan. 4th, 2008 04:07 pm (UTC)
Sweeet! Thank you! :D
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