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Got a cold- sneezy and runny nose, and much use of tissues and drinking liquids.

Brain half working, still managed to get some work done and...two little water tribe pages.
Woot! *snif*...*ATCHOUM!*...Bleargh.

NEXT: Finally, everyone meets. A little bit more talking ensues and then...


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Oct. 9th, 2007 03:30 am (UTC)
The silence before the storm? I love the quiteness of page 131, the shot of him walking alone in the mess, calculating the last details.. Great tension there! Makes me almost trust this crazy plan, almost like he has everything under control.. The shot with all 4 ships is fantastic too! Very cinematic feeling :D
Get well soon! Eat spicy food!
Oct. 9th, 2007 03:42 am (UTC)
Quiet before the storm...haha, oh I guess you are so right! Read on...should get to the storm soon enough.
I ate a lot of spicy food just last Friday. Went to a good indian place, one that is not afraid of making their food spicy. Madras Chicken spice burns you up nicely.
Guess I now have another reason to go back.
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Oct. 9th, 2007 03:44 am (UTC)
Feels like a small cold. If I take care, should be done in a few days.

Thank you, glad you like. I can't WAIT to get to those pages too. Enough talking, I want action!
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Oct. 9th, 2007 04:29 am (UTC)
Awww everyone is getting sick! Someone suggested the weather change~
My friends and I went running around in the rain in Orlando, they all got sick but me....now mom's sick and people at work are sick o_o now you too!
I hope you feel betterz soon~

I hope that young punk get what's coming to him, lol
Oct. 9th, 2007 01:33 pm (UTC)
Man, if I caught the Florida bug early...I mean, usually you have to wait for the Quebec people to come BACK from Florida to catch those.

As for Yueh...aww, poor him, he just wants to be the best and get his revenge.
(oh yeah, he'll pay)
Oct. 9th, 2007 04:38 am (UTC)
Yueh is so asking for it :B Almost action time! Yay!

Hope you start feeling better soon, my brother and my students are all sniffling and sneezing all over the place, its only a matter of time for me i guess D:
Oct. 9th, 2007 01:53 pm (UTC)
Hehe, he's been asking for it aaaalllll the way back in the fire nation.

eeep, hope you don't catch any big cold. Very very annoying.
Oct. 9th, 2007 05:27 am (UTC)
"... just hope I haven't misjudged my value as bait." Hm! Finally tempered that arrogance a bit, interesting! You're really building up the tension here, can't wait to see what comes next!

Hope you feel better - take care.
Oct. 9th, 2007 01:54 pm (UTC)
Is it tempered arrogance, of does he actually believe he is the best bait that ever was?
Wait, somehow that doesn't sound right at all.

Already doing slightly better today, despite lack of sleep.
Oct. 9th, 2007 05:31 am (UTC)
Awww, hope you feel better soon. Some coworkers of mine are coming down with colds, too. Drink lots of liquids!

These pages are so suspenseful! You do a wonderful job of building up tension, even with relatively calm pages.
Oct. 9th, 2007 01:55 pm (UTC)
No problem for liquids- it's going to be water all day. I'll drown the stupid thing!!

Glad that there's a bit of tension coming off these pages. I look at them too much, I'm not certain if they work.
Oct. 9th, 2007 05:35 am (UTC)
Every details must be perfect.

Should be detail (panel 3), singular.

Every detail
All details

(love the story so far, btw. Comics ♥ )
Oct. 9th, 2007 05:37 am (UTC)
Colds definitely suck. Nose running like a sieve, all that... gah. Tea?
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Oct. 9th, 2007 05:44 am (UTC)
Woah...everyone's having a cold in this cold season. >_>;

Oh yeah...Zhao as bait is an insane plan alright, and that young officer who wants to take him down, isn't he the same kid whom Zhao pummeled at the inn? :D
Oct. 9th, 2007 01:45 pm (UTC)
That is indeed the exact same kid, and that is why he wants to take Zhao down. Make him pay for the broken arms, with interests.
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Oct. 9th, 2007 01:45 pm (UTC)
He's certainly trying to pull off a huge deception stunt...
Oct. 9th, 2007 09:34 am (UTC)
Much sympathy on the cold.

The pages are great. I can practically hear the ominous music in the background.
Oct. 9th, 2007 01:58 pm (UTC)
Thanks- I think I'm already winning the battle against the cold, but I ain't celebrating yet.

Glad to know the pages are working...and they have their own soundtrack!
Oct. 9th, 2007 12:42 pm (UTC)
Love the detail.
Oct. 9th, 2007 01:58 pm (UTC)
heh. If Zhao can't outfight them, he's gonna try to trap them ;)
Oct. 9th, 2007 02:44 pm (UTC)
I think I have finally beat back my cold without it blossoming into the full thing. *arms up* Good thing too as I have a con every weekend for the next three weekends.

*shares spicy soup*

Loooove these pages. A bit of decompressed story-telling, allowing the mood to build, and showing us Zhao's teeny bit of insecurity regarding his plan.

Mmmm arrogant AND wily... what an attractive guy!
Oct. 9th, 2007 03:28 pm (UTC)
Lucky you! Beat the cold AND cons almost every weekends of the month. Fun!

Yup, arrogant, wily...what, no mention of shirtlesness? ;)

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Oct. 9th, 2007 08:32 pm (UTC)
Wow, I am touched the pages manage to create so much...noise :) Thank you!

Cold seems to be going away. If I get some more rest, I should be good in a day or two.
Oct. 9th, 2007 04:01 pm (UTC)
I've been lurking around for awhile, and I finally just had to get an lj to comment on this. I am in love with this AU. It's fantastic. This is so professionally done - with the exception of a couple minor spelling/grammar issues (but I'm an English/Art major, so I'm fairly picky).

I love the panel of the four ships on the second page - it's very cinematic. I just looked at it for a bit, seeing the angle of the light and the smoke. Also, I have to say I'm very impressed with your ability to show movement, whether it's significant (as in a fight), or limited (as in walking, or the wind blowing someone's hair or clothes). You really have this great life to your drawing.

I'm looking forward to more of this AU, and I hope you get over your cold!
Oct. 9th, 2007 06:16 pm (UTC)
Having grown up mostly with the french language, I do lack some english grammar and stuff- but I gotta love the web: I'm finding many great proofreaders to help! (and it is ALWAYS appreciated!)

Thank you very much for your kind words. These are still work in progress- rough thumbnails. Some panels need rework and all that (nitpick, nitpick).
Cold seems to be wanting to go away. As for this AU, I am almost at the end of the third part so at least, we'll have reached an ending...of sorts.
Then I'll take a break and rework the first part. Woot!
Oct. 9th, 2007 05:29 pm (UTC)
I can so totaly sympathise with the cold...

Oh Zhao! How could you even DOUBT you value as bait? The fangirls would certianly bite by the thousands! :D
Oct. 9th, 2007 05:59 pm (UTC)
Haha, so he makes great fangirl bait, but that's not who he's trying to catch this time.

There's a small comic to be done with this, I know it...
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