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Reworks part 3


Almost nothing changed. Just slight tweaks.






Next post will be some pages for part 4. I'm struggling a bit with them, as they feel a bit weak, but perhaps in the whole context of the story they'll fit better. We'll see...

Sleep time!
(on a side note: I wish I could listen to Radio-Canada news on the web. But, because of the Olympics, pretty much everything is blocked due to copyright reasons and all that. Even the freakin' radio! I'm stuck listening to LCN if I want news in french. Blah!!)

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pretty_angel
Aug. 10th, 2008 11:00 am (UTC)
OMG - Yueh's facial expressions on the last page are hilarious. XD
Does he realize that he and Zhao have so much in common? :3 Like having the preference to humiliate your enemies.
rufftoon
Aug. 10th, 2008 04:58 pm (UTC)
Both he and Zhao would refute any similarities...but yeah, they're way too close to be comfortable. One must go!!
snapes_angel
Aug. 10th, 2008 01:14 pm (UTC)
First page, 4th panel: Resources, not "resources". ^_^ But man, is that guy pompous! (Hehe. Wondering if we should sic Dagre on him.)

ftw!
rufftoon
Aug. 10th, 2008 04:59 pm (UTC)
Will be fixed for DA post- thanks again for your sharp eyes!
I'd be scared to have Dagre after him...they'd be making a deal and take over the world or something.
snapes_angel
Aug. 10th, 2008 09:29 pm (UTC)
:rofl: But where would that leave poor Luca?
rufftoon
Aug. 10th, 2008 09:35 pm (UTC)
Luca will conquer his own world. I guess they can share the universe.
snapes_angel
Aug. 11th, 2008 02:08 pm (UTC)
Probably.
ks_claw
Aug. 10th, 2008 01:19 pm (UTC)
*blinks.. waves hand in front of Lao's face.. knocks him on the forehead...*

Lights are on, but no one's answering the phone oO
rufftoon
Aug. 10th, 2008 05:00 pm (UTC)
It was a nasty hit. Can't blame Lao for not being all there.
ks_claw
Aug. 10th, 2008 07:09 pm (UTC)
Which goes to show, that Zhao has a damn good aim!
silverandgold06
Aug. 10th, 2008 09:14 pm (UTC)
I looove the expressions. :D
(Anonymous)
Aug. 11th, 2008 02:42 pm (UTC)
Cool sequence -

175, pn. 4 - Maybe zoom in to make it a medium shot - (it's a good punch line, seeing the speakers expression cold add a bit of drama and suspense...)

Cheers,

Skylark
(Anonymous)
Aug. 11th, 2008 11:26 pm (UTC)
In the 2nd panel of p.175, there's no need to add an 's' at the end of 'proof', as the singular form references any evidence that there is.
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