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Part 4 updates!

Not much else to add...I just feel like I'm making these pages too fast, simply because I want to keep moving on.


I better stop trying to number these. With the part 3 reworks, all page numbers are now completely off.

Last entry finished with that page.


Now we move on to Azula. Things are ever so slowly starting to fall into place (or fall apart, depends where you stand):










I just wanted to hint slightly about Azula's time in the fire nation. The dialogue can be tweaked around these pages.
Azula's captain doesn't have a name! Anyone with suggestions...(worked well with Kwon). All I know of him is that he's a man totally loyal to firelord Ozai. He knows Azula was officially named firelord by her father, therefore he recognizes her power, not that of Zuko.
As for Zhao...trying to make powerful fire using water bending moves.
Not gonna happen.
Ever!

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riicchan
Aug. 4th, 2008 06:37 am (UTC)
How does Xing Ba sound? :)

(...okay, so it's because he reminds me of Xigbar from Kingdom Hearts, but I think it's a nice name. :D)
sdskuld
Aug. 4th, 2008 06:46 am (UTC)
Azula always lies. Azula always lies. Azula always lies.
snapes_angel
Aug. 4th, 2008 06:48 am (UTC)
...Awake at night, plotting her brother's destruction.

*runs*
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snapes_angel
Aug. 4th, 2008 06:47 am (UTC)
ftw!

I like Xian, but... lol.
alexds1
Aug. 4th, 2008 06:59 am (UTC)
lol, 'none would be stupid enough to come here' ... haha, so bitter <3 I cant tell that these were quickly done, it reads as naturally as anyone could want. And Azula is right, unfortunately :C She is good at spotting weakness.
rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:13 pm (UTC)
Him, bitter? Just a little. Ok, a lot. (I'll be changing the first panel of the 6th page- pose way to similar to precedent page- needs to be cropped closer or something...why do I think of these things AFTERWARDS!!)
Azula still believe she's a people person. She's right most of the time too.
chelethechicken
Aug. 4th, 2008 07:08 am (UTC)
Oooo waterbending moves from a firebender. Scaaaary.

A.so yay for insane Azula. Someone give her a cookie and some crayons to draw on those lovely white asylum walls.

And...um...Captain Zurak! Lolol, sounds like a spaceship captain or something. So maybe like Captain Ryzuk, lol. Iono, I can't think of names. D:
rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:15 pm (UTC)
But the waterbending moves really don't result in a lot.
Azula would claim she is very much in control of her little weakness. No needs for crayons.
Ha ha, I see your brain is going in the same direction than mine for names.

Edited at 2008-08-04 03:16 pm (UTC)
themadfish
Aug. 4th, 2008 07:30 am (UTC)
Mmmm Azula. Wow, she's looking really beautiful. Oh Zhao and your waterbending moves. <3

Zhan ma? if only because if you reverse that, it sounds like the taiwanese word for sticky rice w/meat stuff wrapped in bamboo leaves

Er, if last names only, Tai?
First names, Zu-ming, Zhen-han, Yu-ming...

Kaizo, for a more Japanese sounding name?
mercurysblood
Aug. 4th, 2008 11:44 am (UTC)
zhan ma... War horse?

Maybe you should give at least one meaning for these name suggestions.
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rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:17 pm (UTC)
Arluk can be very serious, then his brain gets him back on track.

Edited at 2008-08-04 03:17 pm (UTC)
star_puppet
Aug. 4th, 2008 08:21 am (UTC)
Hay Arluk is giving Zhao hints again...LOL

may I suggest Kuzei? The eyepatch just gave me a hint. XD
rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:20 pm (UTC)
Arluk would never stop giving hints. He could be even cruder when giving hints, but there's a place and time for those.
azvolrien
Aug. 4th, 2008 12:16 pm (UTC)
Well, as least Azula's back to her old self... more or less.
rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:19 pm (UTC)
Oh yes, she's pretty much back on tracks (with the possibility of deviating, but let's not think about it too much).
pretty_angel
Aug. 4th, 2008 12:30 pm (UTC)
Wonderful pages. May I say that - with regard to the vast size of this project - your "comic practising" absolutely paid off? <3

Haha "Women like men that are in shape..." - Arluk doesn't give in to hook Zhao up with some woman, does he? XD
rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:22 pm (UTC)
Thanks. There are still things to fix and tweak (that first panel of the 6th page WILL change).
Arluk will try and get Zhao thinking of women instead of firebending and such nonsense.
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buttfacemakani
Aug. 4th, 2008 12:32 pm (UTC)
"I know what I want and what I need to do"

..Nauja, right? LOL jkjk

Aw I bet Azula has nightmares about having her bending taken away.
rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:23 pm (UTC)
If only Zhao's brain worked that way. He needs to learn better.
And you can bet Azula totally dreads ending up like her daddy.
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ks_claw
Aug. 4th, 2008 12:50 pm (UTC)
With no offence meant, but on page 230 in the second-to-last panel, it looks like Zhao is giving the finger as he casts the fire XD; (or what its called ;^^)
rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:24 pm (UTC)
flippin' the bird!
Ha ha, I had not noticed XD I'll tweak it a bit so there's no innuendo.
arcana_j
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:17 pm (UTC)
"Azula's captain doesn't have a name! Anyone with suggestions..."

I'd call him Jun. Wait, has that been used already? How about Goro then?
rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 03:25 pm (UTC)
Jun was the name of the bounty hunter. Goro does sound nice...hmmm...but someone mentionned Zhan Ma (War Horse), and that does fit him rather well.
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tammylee
Aug. 4th, 2008 05:09 pm (UTC)
*cough* Yes, we ladies DO like a man who keeps in shape.
rufftoon
Aug. 4th, 2008 07:53 pm (UTC)
Well, we ain't complaining when they are in shape, that's for sure.
natcomplex
Aug. 4th, 2008 08:31 pm (UTC)
How about a name like, Honshu?
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