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Water Tribe reworks

Many little things happening - more on that in later posts this week. In the meantime, some Water Tribe page reworks (minor tweaks).
This weekend, I didn't do much else but relax (doodling counts as relaxing, right?), since I need to do that a bit.


I gotta count how many pages I got so far (including part 4), 'cause at this rate, with part 4, I will break the 300 pages barrier.
I maintain the insane verdict as defense for my lost cause of Avatar Brain Rot.







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raucousraven
Jun. 16th, 2008 06:05 am (UTC)
This is so cool. (Ha! Like that, too!) Nice flashback scence... very smooth transition. The last line and the far-off perspective, in conjunction with Zhao's invocation of the Sea Spirit, kind of gives me shivers.
rufftoon
Jun. 16th, 2008 06:48 am (UTC)
Shivers is good!
I'm sure Zhao wished he had a direct line with the Ocean Spirit. He'd have a few questions for it (on top of a few requests).
archangelbeth
Jun. 16th, 2008 02:02 pm (UTC)
Requests? Or demands? O:D

Yessss, that flashback was eeeeexcellent. *squees happily at you*
rufftoon
Jun. 16th, 2008 03:20 pm (UTC)
The proper word would probably be demands.
Which he'd promptly regret making.

Edited at 2008-06-16 03:21 pm (UTC)
archangelbeth
Jun. 16th, 2008 06:11 pm (UTC)
Oh, of course! But, well, Mr. No Self Control does tend to demand first, and repent -- or at least run away in a panic -- later...
tammylee
Jun. 16th, 2008 02:50 pm (UTC)
So lovely. In your hands Zhao becomes even better than canon!
rufftoon
Jun. 16th, 2008 03:18 pm (UTC)
I don't know about better. Different, yes (though hopefully not too different, or else it wouldn't be Zhao anymore)
fani
Jun. 16th, 2008 04:43 pm (UTC)
bee....is that Jung spposed to be a joke on Carl Jung?
rufftoon
Jun. 23rd, 2008 05:11 am (UTC)
Sort of a half conscious joke on Jung. It was the first name that popped into my mind, so I kept it.
Me bad.
queen_marshed
Jun. 16th, 2008 05:28 pm (UTC)
Zhao looks adoreable in the flashback. XD

It just sounds kinda wrong. XDDD
rufftoon
Jun. 23rd, 2008 05:11 am (UTC)
Zhao doesn't do adorable!
Well, not consciously anyway.
meryl_jed
Jun. 16th, 2008 06:31 pm (UTC)
Yeah Jung! Stop your blathering about the ocean as a symbol for the collective unconscious! XD

I also love the awkward non-looks the crew is giving Zhao on that page. If you don't SEE the crazy in his eyes, it isn't there right? Right?!
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rufftoon
Jun. 23rd, 2008 05:14 am (UTC)
It is fun giving Zhao another expression different than his usual angry (or smug) one.
snapes_angel
Jun. 17th, 2008 04:22 pm (UTC)
Hehe. Always the strategist, Zhao. You mean he actually learned some patience, if not self control? Good for him!
rufftoon
Jun. 23rd, 2008 05:13 am (UTC)
He did learn patience. Maybe it's being stuck in a house for days during snowstorm that taught him that.
snapes_angel
Jun. 23rd, 2008 04:49 pm (UTC)
Well, if not patience, then it at least taught him to wait. ^_^
(Anonymous)
Jun. 17th, 2008 05:53 pm (UTC)
Thanky for the previous comment, glad to be of service! (300 pages = amazing productivity)

This ice chase sequence is cool!

Suggestions and such -
p. 148 - nice page
Put 'How?!?' in 2nd panel instead of 1st - maybe in thought balloon...

p. 151 - pn. 4 - flip 180%

p. 152 - pn. 5 - flip 180%

Cheers,

Skylark
rufftoon
Jun. 23rd, 2008 05:13 am (UTC)
Hmmm...I am hesitating flipping the panels. I understand the logic from the reading standpoint, but since I've shown the ship going from right to left in all the other panels, I feel like I'll break the 180 degree rule.
I've been corrupted by animation...
(Anonymous)
Jun. 17th, 2008 11:25 pm (UTC)
-In the third panel of p.147, it should be "He's" to make it present tense.
-In the second panel of p.149, since "records" is plural, "sea currents" should be singular ("sea current records").
-In the first panel of p.151, it should be "...as well as armored, with more weapons and troops".
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